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Sunday, February 27, 2005

Murmurs

She entered the large building with long strides, gripping her briefcase tightly, with a smile on her lips, facing the world straight ahead, making for the elevators in the far side of the building ignoring the escalators.

The floor was still wet. She’d long since decided it was the better of the two evils. In 10 minutes, the first crowd of people would come in hurriedly. To be lost in a crowd was now a myth to her. Wherever she went, she stood out. However tall she tried to walk, she felt other powers towering upon her. However fast she walked, she could somehow never escape. Right now there were already two people – the receptionist and the maid. Everywhere she went, the maid and the receptionst, despite their disparity in ranks, despite the need for one to look prim and proper at all times and for the other to work up a sweat, despite the fact that one needed to be available at all times and the other needed to be unheard and unseen, formed strong bonds and ended up intimidating her.


As she walked in, the receptionist looked up to see who it was that had come into the building that early, and the maid began to twiddle her thumbs because the floor hadn’t yet dried.

“Go warn her”, said the receptionist.
“Why must I ? The last time I tried, I was informed by a person that he could very well see that the floor was wet, and maids like me should be unseen and unheard”
“Don’t worry, this one seems to be the kind who always needs to be at work much before it actually opens. She looks like she is used to walking on wet floors in early mornings. See her eyes. There isn’t a hint of surprise that the building is so empty. She must be new here”
“I’d vote for her”
“She’s not running for anything”
“No, but look at the way she confidently walks with long strides, holding her briefcase tightly? She looks like she could change the world just by changing the contents of that briefcase. I’d vote for her, whatever she runs for”
“Then you better move away because she’s looking at us. You’ll vote for her, and the first thing she’ll do is make sure that maids who are seen and heard do not have jobs along with the receptionists that indulge in such activities”

What was it that they had against her, she wondered. It was with reason that she had chosen to work as a consultant. She knew her job would take her places – if not far away, then at least pretty far apart from each other. Escape that way was always imminent and comforting. Everywhere she went, she saw them standing close to each other, whispering, murmuring, looking at her, assessing her, homing into her deepest insecurities. She’d always wanted to look back and smile at them, but she was worried she’d be accused of having a condescending attitude. Often she told herself that they appreciated her. She always laughed the minute she thought that. Distorting reality was one thing. Creating a complete fairy tale out of it was quite another. Every morning she’d hear them speak softly, yet she could hear them loud enough in her head. They knew her palms were sweaty she thought. She always gripped her briefcase too tightly, concentrating on not dropping it, and her palms sweat all the more, despite the air conditioning. Slippery floors were another problem. The less time her feet spent on the floor, the less her chances are of making a fool of herself, so she walked fast, with long strides, looking straight up. As she walked, her heart flipped a beat. It did that every day and it always meant the same thing – that her world was suddenly just a little more crowded. She forced herself not to quicken her pace.

Anju walked in, smiled at the receptionist, a little more broadly than usual and continued walking, looking down at the floor. In the hazy reflection she wondered if she could see her tears. Pari walked next to her forcing herself herself to keep quiet but yet wanting so desperately to help her friend. Another bill had arrived today, Pari knew. But Anju was done with asking Pari for help and Pari knew that Anju was smiling only because of the pride she gained from standing on her own two feet – literally. Anju was glad that Pari was holding her hands right now.

“Look, I can’t keep quiet any longer. One day, you’ll make it like her. Look ahead”, said Pari.
“Sometimes it’s not even worth dreaming Pari. It really isn’t. Everytime I see someone like her, imagining that they must’ve started from the bottom like me, I get my hopes again”
“You can start by looking at world in its face – like her. See how she keeps her head up. She’s not worried what the mirror is saying to her. She’s brave enough to change her own reflection. She’s even walking alone. She doesn’t even seem to need anyone to tell her what she can and cannot be”
“Okay, don’t get excited. She might hear us”
“We weren’t saying anything wrong”
“Oh look, now she’s going towards the elevators. Walking away from us downtrodden lot, I suppose”
“I think she’s too busy with walking high up in the clouds to bother about what’s beneath it. And I assure you, that’s where you’ll be one day. Now cheer up. This month too shall pass and you’ll come out unscathed.”
“Right ! Since I’ve already reached rock bottom, I don’t need anything to break my fall. I’m already broken and broke”
“And from there, there’s nowhere to go but up”

She looked straight up, at the highest floor of the building. She gave a half hearted smile attempting to ooze confidence. Look at my eyes once, and you’ll know they’re looking not straight at you, but over you, as though you never existed. If only that were true she thought. Sea of faces, or empty places, the only place she ever looked was up, high enough to see over and above the heads where thoughts twirled and connected and somehow linked to her. High enough to ignore the stealthy looks, the miscalculated conclusions, the prejudices, high enough so that she was peaceful enough to smile. They’d only just spotted her, she thought. They were already speaking about her. What did they see at the back of her head ? Could they see, that it was such an effort to keep walking straight ahead when everything behind was intent on stopping her and observing her keenly, as thought she was a specimen to be studied in a lab? She thought lovingly about her imagined joys of suspended animation. Could they see that their whispering, that they had someone to speak to, made her painfully aware that there was no one by her side? She walked towards the elevators. Why people chose to socialize on escalators, she never understood. She preferred the closed space of the elevator. It was claustrophobic, she was told. She looked at is a warm feeling that enclosed her and protected her - a plexiglass enclosure where no one could hurt her.

“Third floor please”, said Akhila, removing her compact and the lipstick from her bag.
Tanu walked in behind her.
“I suppose since you’re taking me via the elevator today, you have something juicy to tell me”, said Tanu.
“No. I had my tooth extracted yesterday and my mouth’s paining and there’s only so much time I can spend smiling artificially at everybody.”
“What you and I need is a real smile – not smiles for occasions. What difference are we from greeting cards then”
“I used to know how to smile properly once. I spend so much time guarding myself these days that no one can every catch myself smiling quietly, to myself, in a corner”
“Here’s our lucky day. Look at the woman at the elevator opposite us. She has a very lovely smile doesn’t she ?”
“She looks like she’s on top of the world”
“Well, someday we’ll be there too. Perhaps it needs a certain altitude, a certain dizziness to be able to really let go and smile”


She looked down at the marble floor of the elevator and smiled. On the elevator opposite her, two women were chattering and smiling- certainly about her. She remembered a time when she was younger, when buildings didn’t need to have swanky see-through elevators. She adored her lone time in them. The only opaque walled elevators now were the express elevators and they were worse than escalators. She caught herself smiling suddenly. Did they reach her eyes, she asked herself. Probably not, not since a long time now, a voice replied. The elevator slowly made its way to the top of the building where she made her way into her large spacious office. It was lonely at the top, she’d been told when many times. It was her only incentive to get there. That’s the only place she felt truly on top of the world in.

4 comments:

buckwaasur said...

hey anaz...loved the alternating narration, but the thing was a bit too long...it seems to be trying to make the same point over and over with different groups of people...

Anonymous said...

guys,
thanks for critical comments everyone :)

ssm,
its strange how a change in mood 3 days apart manifests itself so conspicuously huh ?

buck,
i had a feeling that it was a little "get over with it already". i tried shortening it... one mistake i always make is falling in love with every word i've written, that it becomes too hard to remove.

about different groups of ppl... i needed to cover her thoughts from the time she entered the building to the time she was left alone again. will try to go easy on the over-emphasis next time around :)

ibl,
thanks again.
girlish stuff ? hmm... i've seen groups of girls actually talk like that, although it may have sounded cheesy.
i was hoping it'd make a point abt my central character being idiotically insecure about what was mostly innocent blabber.

gb,
welcome to our world then :)
thanks for dropping by.

Rajavel said...

Anaz ..

cool ! liked the style. of altering POVs The insecurity comes out very well.

Lol@falling in love with words !!! dont take things so seriously !

Reshmi said...

since the critiques hav already been made - i shall resist ....
and just stick to the appreciation part - good read :-)

[interesting to note all-women characters]